Thursday, August 13, 2015

Could You Be My Superhero?

Whoa. I don't remember what I originally had in mind for this, but I like it a lot better than I thought. It shouldn't need too much tweaking... Although the last couple lines bug me; they don't seem to quite rhyme; they don't have the same sort of rhythm.

Could you be my superhero,
And fight off all my deepest fears?
Could you swoop in and save me,
Instead of leaving me stranded here?
Are you the one I've waited for,
That person I can trust?
Could you be my superhero?
Could you be the one I love?
You don't need x-ray vision;
You don't need to read my mind.
You don't need super strength;
I don't care if you can't fly.
Just listen when I need an ear,
And show me that you can be kind.
Be honest and funny and there for me,
And enlighten me when I'm blind.
Could you be my superhero,
And save me from myself?
Could you praise me when I'm right,
And show me when I'm wrong,
And would you feel at all embarrassed
If I randomly burst into song?
Could you be my superhero;
Could I trust you with my life?
Could you be my superhero;
Could you be the one I love? 


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